Heh—I commented. 😊 But I thought I’d leave another particular comment here on the fora because it has nothing to do with “Oto-Hime” and because it seemed more fitting to leave it on here.
In just that short an article, I found it difficult to figure out what “The Sound Princess” actually was. When I clicked on it, I thought it was something along the lines of a Broadway musical (i.e., the Sound Of Music, LOL). Please don’t assume that the readers know everything that you’re talking about in an article. I had to click over to the Yahoo article to figure out what was going on and whatnot. As a revision to future articles, please include a one sentence description of products, events, etc. such as “Oto-Hime” and then continue with paraphased articles such as yours. We don’t really need quotes concerning the statistics and corporation stances—that’s for Yahoo to divulge 😉
Otherwise, it was a nice, concise, and interesting article that I am actually going to refer to friends! It makes for interesting “potty” talk. 😛
Hope you have a wonderful day! 😊 And a job well done for a first time! As I mentioned on my comment, I look forward to reading more from this journalist :D
